Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, the number of people migrating from one country to another has been increasing substantially. Residing in a foreign nation and communicating in a non native language can result in social and practical issues. I completely agree with this thought. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.
First and foremost, people shifting to a foreign land would need to adapt to a new culture and tradition, which sometimes may go against one’s virtues. For instance, Sikhs in India where turbans as a sign of their customs and traditions. However, in the United States of America, which is considered to be a state for all religions and casts, such attire may be inappropriate and not acceptable in a social event. If, persons did not migrate abroad, then cultural differences would not arise.
Secondly, individuals moving abroad for better job opportunities, face communication barriers. This is because they have to communicate in a foreign accent. To illustrate, engineers move to the United States of America, this is the hub for information technology, for pursuing employment opportunities. Communicating in the work place in one’s local language may not be understood by many and can hamper the work. If, foreigners settled abroad do not learn the foreign language, then tasks will not be achieved.
To conclude, people move abroad for better stand of living and job opportunities however face serious social issues because of a difference in cultures and practical problems because of language barriers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31300813008 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0576267324 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9738723491 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173709108846 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642428878926 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547402411364 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112034905885 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594517105209 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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