Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problemsTo what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by karfalcon on Sun, 02/03/2019 - 06:07

In recent years, the number of people migrating from one country to another has been increasing substantially. Residing in a foreign nation and communicating in a non native language can result in social and practical issues. I completely agree with this thought. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.

First and foremost, people shifting to a foreign land would need to adapt to a new culture and tradition, which sometimes may go against one’s virtues. For instance, Sikhs’ in India where turbans as a sign of their customs and traditions, while in the United States of America, which is considered to be a country for all religions and cast, such attire may be inappropriate and not acceptable in a social event. If persons did not migrate abroad, then cultural differences would not arise.

Secondly, individuals moving abroad for better job opportunities, face communication barriers. This is because they have to communicate with a foreign accent. To illustrate, engineers move to the United States of America, which is the hub for information technology, for pursuing employment opportunities. Communicating in the workplace in one’s local language may not be understood by many and can hamper the work. If foreigners settled abroad do not learn the foreign language, then tasks will not be achieved.

To conclude, people move abroad for a better standard of living and job opportunities. However, face serious social issues because of a difference in cultures. Furthermore, they also encounter numerous practical problems because of language barriers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.404 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13478803111 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8686422498 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178437123133 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657880879514 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559747248964 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113498280009 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055950670951 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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