Write a letter to a friend inviting on family function. What is the occasion? what are your plans? and why is it important that she should come?
Dear Sally,
Hi how are you doing there in Amsterdam? I am writing to you because I am inviting you to the wedding of my cousin next month.
This event will happen on 27th of March you will one of our guest of honor. My mother insisted me to invite you since you are already part of our family. I have a lot of plans for that week like bachelor party, museum hopping and sports activities. Since there would be a lot of visitors coming from other nations as well as family friends.
It is a must that you are here because I already missed you so much and so that we could continue the spark that we left back in the days.
If you have questions or sudden change of your arrival date. You can always contact in my email bill@mail.com or give me a call at number 1234567.
Okay, I look forward seeing you.
Best wishes,
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: PRP_MD_CD_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'will use one' or 'will be one'?
Suggestion: will use one; will be one
... event will happen on 27th of March you will one of our guest of honor. My mother insist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31446540881 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18190957684 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5608727321 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3636363636 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0573896388861 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227346050336 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027147123913 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0279653614393 0.12726935374 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263038046438 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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