Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A child is the future of a Nation. Some people, however, worry that these children would become self-centered grownups if given a lot of liberty while many others argue that it is of paramount importance for them to have a say in the matters that impact themselves. We will debate on both the sides and derive upon a seasoned conclusion.
Some hold a firm belief that children’s decision making on the matters such as what to wear, to eat and to play with may create the tendency of prioritizing their own interests. For instance, when parents tend to give in to the child’s unreasonable demands like eating junk food out of proportion, entertaining themselves with expensive unaffordable toys. These children cannot just take no for an answer. Gradually, this tendency is likely to turn them into egocentric society members who place their own benefits above others'.
Some, in contrast, argue that allowing children to go for what they prefer is crucial for their early education and long-term development. First, decision making means the children are in charge of both their choices and the consequences of those. This is an invaluable method to teach them to be sensible and self-reliant as well as prepare them to become responsible citizens. Another point is, since their opinions are respected by others, these children would be mindful of people’s wishes before doing something. For example, parents of late look forward to sending their unruly children to hostels to become more responsible and highly independent citizens
In spite of some arguments on both sides of the case, I am of the opinion that children should be encouraged to express their desires and make decisions based on them as self-decision plays an important role in shaping their mind set and personalities. Also, with appropriate guidance from their guardians, the negative effects of this approach can be prevented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18649517685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91262247677 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.0683501143 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24253513684 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784493405318 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615272967447 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13596249425 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591075866219 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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