Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much
attention from their parents as children did in the past.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the children receive less attention as compared to the kids in the past due to the time constraints of their parents. In my view, the effects of sparing less time by a couple for their sons or daughters can be detrimental. Also, this essay will enlighten the different causes and the possible impacts of this on youngsters.
To begin with, people are mostly busy with their jobs in today's modern world due to this fast-paced work environment. Also, everyone wants to succeed in their profession which leads them to spend extra hours at their workplace. For instance, employees in Apple work from morning to late night so that their assigned targets can be achieved within a set deadline. As a result, they might end up devoting minimal time towards the welfare of their kids.
Furthermore, a part of population spend the weekend cooking and preparing enough meals for the week ahead. On the same note, some families enjoy to relax with their friends during the leisure time which refrains them to pay enough attention towards their kids. For example, the survey performed by UCLA showed that the parents who work extra hours in a day hardly pay attention to either the school work or the personal life of their children. So, a student might end up scoring lesser grades than expected in his studies.
In conclusion, the parents who consume the majority of the day at the office have a nominal time to take care of their children. In addition, the study and habits of these kids might also get impacted as a result of this behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy relaxing'.
Suggestion: enjoy relaxing
... ahead. On the same note, some families enjoy to relax with their friends during the leisure t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75276752768 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44343421721 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1208123318 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245195614166 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835004070388 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649203780921 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1529919173 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015424529992 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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