6. Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
It is true that a majority today’s generation is motivated and inspired from various sports stars or glamorous film stars. But the real concern in such cases is if the motivation this generation receives is a positive ornegative moreover if the people youngsters admire stand up to the required standards to be of a motivation to them?
The effect of this can be clearly seen in social media these day wherein people worship the celebrities in a near god form, but should that be done? Do their acts deserve people to worship them? Many cases from recent days can be seen where in Olympians and sports stars are convicted of using performance enhancing drugs or illegal steroids among other heinous acts. Mostly because of this youngsters should be discouraged from being inclined towards them.
Moreover youths are also admired the roles played by movie stars, be it a good role or bad one. For reference, Niam Leeson one of the very famous Hollywood actors plays the role of hero in many films but goes around killing people in many ways, which may inspire the youth to do the same when they face such a situation. Many stars even have a lifestyle which can be easily questioned by morale ethics, and if such the generation today is motivated by such a generation then what exactly will the future be like?
To recapitulate, we cannot control what one watches but we can very influence someone to the right direction and show them the right people to be actually motivated by. There are many social workers who work for the betterment of the world and can be great motivation for the kids of today, and we need to bring such people to foreground so that youth be motivated from them rather than relying on a scriptwriter’s imagination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...aged from being inclined towards them. Moreover youths are also admired the roles playe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77960526316 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65968339698 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9681336396 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.090909091 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118334127919 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549112898402 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589869417136 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788411613401 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377119215868 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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