You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend.
In your letter
Explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Eric:
i’m writing to inform you my new address after I have moved to my new flat. i’m sorry because that I have heard your call last week but I can’t answer it due to I were busing in moving stuff to the truck.
I have lived in the old flat for almost half a year. The location of there is such far away from my company. I need spend a huge proportion of my time on transportation everyday. I feel exhaust when I get home. Therefore, I must move to a closer flat soon.
The new flat which I live in at the moment is a fantastic choice to me. It’s only cost 5 minutes by walk to my company. Moreover, I have a big balcony so that I can thke a sun shine shower at the weekend.
I miss you so much. I want to invite you and your girlfriend to my new flat this Sunday . We can have a drink together.
Best regards
Nathan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Eric: i'm writing to inform...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
Dear Eric: i'm writing to inform you my new address ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...ress after I have moved to my new flat. i'm sorry because that I have heard your ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...proportion of my time on transportation everyday. I feel exhaust when I get home. Theref...
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Line 11, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ur girlfriend to my new flat this Sunday . We can have a drink together. Best r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17261904762 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36931825409 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9340971639 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.0714285714 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194557388581 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601509863329 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619449394 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12984053994 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817638907992 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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