You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:-Explain the important-Apologize for the situation-Suggest a new arrangement

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You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement

Dear Raj,
I am writing to inform you on delaying my visit in your place as supposed to what we had last talked about.

It is my utmost regret to tell you that I cannot be able to leave our province on the 20th of January next year because my brother, Francis, suddenly decided to hold his wedding on the 24th. It has been a swift change of plans on my part and I apologize for this short notice. I know that you have been excited since I booked my flight to London and I really missed you very much after five years of not seeing you, it makes me wonder how you have become now.

After the wedding, I can already be available and in no time, I will definitely be there. I changed my flight schedule to 26th of January, making myself available on the 27th as a godparent of your daughter, Angeline. I have also extended my stay to four weeks instead of two weeks to spend more time with you and your family. We have plenty of stories to catch up together since we parted ways, so be ready with it.

Again, I apologize for the inconvenience. I look forward to seeing you soon. Please contact me through skype should you need to clarify our schedules and need further arrangement.

Love lots,
Fiona

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33920704846 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30177792293 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638766519824 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9174167975 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157398728175 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569619501636 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414504209301 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101051379483 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248574070403 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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