The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The table lists the number of factories and the number of male and female employees in England and Wales for a 50 years period.
Overall, the number of factories appear to increase over the period with slight fluctuation, but the number of total employees decrease, with a much greater reduction in the female employees rather than the male employees.
Over the span of 50 years, factories appear to rise, with a high upward movement from the period of 1861 with 227 factories to 622 in the period of 1871 with another further increase in 1891 with a total of 721 factories. However, there occurs a fall of about 100 factories in the period 1891 with more decrease to about 625 in the last period.
The number of women working in factories fall to a greater extent from 160,000 employees in 1861s to 60,000 employees in the 1871s, with experiencing further reduction till the last period. In contrast, the male employees also reduce but with a lower margin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80239520958 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47353955591 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455089820359 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8372432673 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131638199886 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850495659263 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628019338695 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112342985456 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599002031828 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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