Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy.However, others feel that the foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help local companies to contribute to economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is always said that, the growth or development of economy of any country is largely dependent on its relationship with other countries since, different currencies flow in a country largely effects its capital to a great extent. Hence, I always agree with setting up of multinational companies which creates a basic trend and culture that always helps in euphoria of more cash inflow. In this essay, some of the positive and negative points are discussed along with the conclusion based on the brighter sides.
First of all, inviting foreign countries is nothing but building a trade relationship between them in a stronger way for a longer run. This enhances the job prospects for most of the people in surrounding areas which boosts the real estate and other businesses that depends on them. Apart from this, increase in these organizations, brings their culture and tradition to the nation which in turn improves people surrounding them.
Apart from this, the goals and standards of foreign companies creates a new rules for the native companies, which in term develops the local companies to compete with the multinational standards which in-turn helps them to grow their setup in other countries. Hence, it boosts the revenue of the nation to the larger extent.For example, due to booming of large international IT companies to our nation, has significantly improved the job prospects in a major way in last 15 years.
But some claim that, origin of these multinational companies has destroyed the culture of people which is primarily depends upon nature of an individual not on to blame on these companies.
On weighing both the side of arguments, advantages always far exceeds the disadvantages on setting up of these companies. Hence I agree in establishing this companies due to all these bright views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, apart from, for example, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12751677852 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84756804217 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4374479777 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208662133456 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752392385012 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614186451984 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11280141826 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623821183016 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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