the importance of teachers is diminishing due to increased availability of alternative resources to students. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement .
Education is the key to open the lock of success. Presently, gone are the days when teachers is considered to be the first and last source of study for students due to advancement in other sources. Here, I would like to discord with the given statement at larger extent.
There are manifold points to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, teachers teach their students with many skills and make them superior in every field. To illustrate, unlike technological resources, teachers modify the mistakes of students in an effective way and confer simple method of learning so that students do not forget methods for lifetime and keep everything in mind . Moreover, teacher not only provide academic subjects but also engage them with other curricular activities such as painting, dancing, singing, and physical exercises and many more. Therefore, the roll of teachers in student life is matchless.
Further emphasising on my point of view. Through teachers students can become the owners of great personality. For example, other resources such as internet, projector and many others are only give students material regarding study. On the other side, a teacher can teach their students with supereme traits. These moral and social values make students a noble character for society and nation. Thus, there is no comparison of teachers in students life.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, other resources are imperative for extra learning. However still I believe that students life without teachers life is like a ship without sailor.
- the given table shows that children had taken part in different cultures activities in the last 12 months. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant . 78
- some people think that the advantages of advertising sports products through famous sports players outweigh the disadvantages. to what e do you agree or disagree. 56
- the graph below shows average annual expenditure on cell phone or Residential phone service between 2001and 2010. 61
- some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museum town hall and sporting facility is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. discuss both views. 73
- some people say that subject like art, drama, add creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore thay need more of these subject to be included in the timetable. do you agree or disagree. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Further,
...chers in student life is matchless. Further emphasising on my point of view. Throug...
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Suggestion:
...s life. To recapitulate, Undeniably, other resources are imperative for extra...
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Suggestion: students'; student's
... learning. However still I believe that students life without teachers life is like a sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27642276423 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69387492055 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4101140962 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126905973646 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445992755324 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343206399028 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839768689663 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025996143982 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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