Many Museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages.
There is no doubt that museums play a significant role in society as they contain valuable artifacts. Some museums charge an entry fee while others are free of any charge. In my opinion, I believe museums should charge a nominal fee to all visitors not only because the maintenance cost for such artifacts is huge but also require funds for infrastructure development.
Firstly, museums are a main attraction not only to students but also tourists, as the artifacts may have ample amounts of information, which may be useful for studies and promoting the place where these have been discovered. An entry fee to such museums may result in a decline of the visitors. This is because, the fee may not justify it's worth. To illustrate, many professors take school students to museums to understand the kind of life that existed many years ago, however a charge being imposed may reduce the visit of school tours as this would result in an additional cost to the school. In short, a charge for admission may result in reduction of the visitors.
Secondly, in my opinion, maintaining the priceless artifacts involves a huge cost, as this includes hiring of resources and purchasing of special equipment, which the museum's alone may find it difficult. This is because, they are likely to receive no other additional income apart from government funding, which may not be sufficient to carry out its activities smoothly. To illustrate, payment of salaries to curators in order to demonstrate and explain the significance of the artifacts to the visitors. Additionally, huge investments are required for maintenance of the artifacts. For instance, buying of special equipment. As a result, museums charging a reasonable fee can afford to give its visitors the best experience.
In conclusion, museums charging a fee may lead in a decline of this visitors. However, in my opinion, I believe a nominal fee being charged to all visitors will help them to not only maintain its artifacts and infrastructure but also give them an experience they will cherish for life. Hence, from the above points discussed, the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10227272727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93326580716 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8609208837 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279134526289 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992595567801 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749374042942 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187131512875 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569719976893 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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