Some people think that public libraries are necessary, while others argue that it is not necessary.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Few men and women deem that general libraries are required, whereas others think that it plays a significant role for the betterment of people. While availability of online reading materials and maintenance cost could be the reason that some people oppose this notion, I believe that it is indeed helpful for deprived people as well as it renders studious ambience to scholars.
On the one hand, in this era of technological advancement, most of the books could be found on the Internet; and, people can download books of different topics without any charges. For example, I used to download various books from ebooks.com on free of cost. Secondly, it is arduous to ey maintain libraries because it requires a lot of money as well as large number of employees to run it smoothly. However, these funds could be utilized on other sectors which are more important to address. To exemplify, instead of funding libraries, financial support should be given to eradicate poverty from the society.
On the other hand, everyone is not blessed with all the amenities due to monetary crisis. As poor people hardly manage to fulfill their basic needs, it would be next to impossible for them to procure latest gizmos for reading. To illustrate, in underdeveloped countries where rudimentary requirements are tough to obtain, people cannot afford to spend money on books. Furthermore, bright students can use libraries as an ideal place for reading because it provides serene atmosphere without any noise pollution. Therefore, I believe that a cardinal role has been played by public libraries due to above mentioned factors.
To recapitulate, although spectrum of books could be downloaded from the cyberspace and refurbishment cost of libraries are higher, I think that benefits get by deprived people as well as noise-free environment for students are way more fruitful. Hence, I bolster the notion that public libraries play an imperative role in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'procure the latest'.
Suggestion: procure the latest
...would be next to impossible for them to procure latest gizmos for reading. To illustrate, in u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18987341772 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85776139527 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.83237207 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13521107925 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461967055101 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319784460587 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092788868424 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371936231917 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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