Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
With proliferation in technology, travelling has become convenient and more exhilarating than ever before. In fact, many visitors opt for travel destinations where conditions are extremely difficult to live. There are plethora of advantages and disadvantages of choosing such travel locations, which will be discussed below.
One of the main advantages is most human seeks adventure in their lives and thrilling trip can do wonders for them. In search of same, they sometimes choose challenging trip to deserted locations. For instance, myriads of people are choosing trek to the Mount Everest or few days stay in the Antarctica over a relaxing tour to the Bali. Secondly, some of these travelers also get to learn unique cultures and traditions. They also do not hesitate to travel the whole globe. For instance, there is a native tribe in south western forest of Africa called ‘Zulus’ who have their own sign language to communicate with each other. These kinds of rare disparities can only be understood, if one visits such extreme unwelcoming places.
However, there are disadvantages as well in travelling to such unlivable places. Firstly, many tourists do not consider if they are fit enough to visit such places, that have extreme climatic conditions. As a consequence, this sometimes leads to serious health hazards. For instance, People with history of heat syncope are more prone to heat stroke in trip to Sahara Desert. Also Some of these destination are not at all pocket-friendly and hence can put a lot of pressure on tourist’s travel budgets.
In conclusion, Myriads of tourists are visiting to these locations, where living conditions are extremely unsuitable. There are varieties of pros such as, they receive gratification to experience something challenging, they learn new cultures but on the down side, some unfit people can fall sick, also sometimes these trips can be financially exhausting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to challenge'.
Suggestion: to challenge
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to trek'
Suggestion: to trek
...nstance, myriads of people are choosing trek to the Mount Everest or few days stay i...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o heat stroke in trip to Sahara Desert. Also Some of these destination are not at al...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this destination' or 'these destinations'?
Suggestion: this destination; these destinations
... in trip to Sahara Desert. Also Some of these destination are not at all pocket-friendly and henc...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion to experience something challenging, they learn new cultures but on the down ...
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Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: DOWN_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
..., they learn new cultures but on the down side, some unfit people can fall sick, also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32679738562 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04451712758 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3351564133 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216861747533 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677996306491 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576641644817 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141627228858 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492759272032 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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