In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and they lack a sense of community. What are the causes? How to solve this problem?
It is true that people nowadays usually do not have good relationships with their neighbors, and there could be various reasons that lead to a loss of ability to get on well with people who live near your house. In my opinion, there can be some possible solutions to deal with the problem.
As the improvement in the quality of life, people have tendencies to stay in their comfort zones instead of going out talking to people around them. The main reason for lacking senses of community is shortages of time. The amount of work tends to considerably increase due to the development of the society which prevents people from meeting each other regularly. People are often busy with their own work and they do not have time enjoying themselves, therefore, it is understandable that they tend to spend their free time relaxing at home rather than having time talking to people in their neighborhood. For example, at weekend, many people choose to stay at home spending time with their families, watching television or surfing the Internet instead of going out.
However, there are some steps that government could take to tackle the problem. The first objection is that they can invest money in the buildings of social places such as parks, playgrounds for children, community centres, etc, which can help to improve the relationships between people in the city. For example, parents can bring their youngsters with them to a park where there is a playing area, then they can not only enjoy themselves by going for a walk and talking to the others but also do not have to keep an eye on their children. Secondly, the local government can organise some social events and programmes for citizens to participate in. For instance, they can hold a lecture in which people can learn about life in urban areas or a programme which provides local people opportunities with to work in teams and build relationships.
In conclusion, there are still some possible solutions to solve the problem to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88505747126 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63357013139 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537356321839 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2382612644 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198762780929 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720177670279 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355752411843 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116027615272 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349775491123 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.