Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advancement in technology has come up with myriad new options to view films via, smartphones tablets, laptops. A section of the society is of the opinion that viewing a film on the phones or tablets is far more feasible and even more economical than watching it in the theatre. This essay would analyse both viewpoints as well as, present my opinion during the course of the essay
On the one side of the argument, there are people who hold the opinion, that films can be enjoyed on phones or even tablets present the most compelling reason behind that is with the advent of Internet an easy on the pocket budgeted Netflix package ranging from 500 rs to 800 rs you can watch unlimited range of new films as per you ease and convenience. For instance, many business flyers can see any film of their choice without being disturbed at a throw away price, saving them from the trouble of booking their tickets or even going to the theatre. At the click of a button they can have an easy access to world Cinema ad even award winning Globally acclaimed films. So smartphones have played an instrumental in bridging the gap between the filmmaker and the viewer.
On the other side there are people who differ largely on the premise that films are meant to be enjoyed in the Cinema hall, with excellent cinematography. Simply, a big budget film on a huge screen with plenty of detail. It also offers a surround-sound system that enhances the overall experience, making you feel as if you're actually part of the story. For example, films like titanic, harry potter, Avatar, Jurassic park came with special effects and a lot of 3D effects. All the efforts of the director an even the artist would go waste. Since you would not be able to visualize the hard work gone behind creating such a master piece. So further, going to the theatre is certainly an exciting venture.
I am of the partial opinion that films and cinema have always been man’s prime mode of entertainment. So for the economical viewer, if theatres seem to an expensive proposition he could even find his entertainment through his ubiquitous Gadget and once in a while they could also catch a glimpse of an exceptionally acclaimed film in a Cinema hall. Moreover, for an affluent viewer I would always recommend a visit to the theatre
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71534653465 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59481981901 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571782178218 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2646806272 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227256296946 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677723457813 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052859334728 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134410287529 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030147403348 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.