These graphs show the result of a survey. 100 people (single men and women and couples with/without children) were interviewed to find out who they typically spend time with on a free day. The percentages shown here are averages.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The result of a survey among 100 people who classified into two groups; single both males and females; and the couples with and without children were interviewed about their typically spend free time with. This percentage presents in these bar graphs.
The figure for those men aged 18 – 30 who tend to spend their time with friend is 47% while around 46% women more likely having quality time with their family. If we compare with the couples either with or without children, the percentage of those single in spending time with their family were less than those couples, but the highest number was the couples with children at 71%. There is a double increasing proportion of couples who have children comparing with those single.
However, both single and women are less likely to spend their leisure time just by themselves, this showed by the lowest number of such single percentage that only 25% and under. A significant differences are also seen in those who already get married, they opt to having quality time with family than the others like friends or even alone, it is clearly that another percentage no more than 31%.
Overall, for those couples aged 18 – 30 with children and single females more likely having quality time with their own family which partners and children are included whereas for those single men spend the most time with their friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...spend the most time with their friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91025641026 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18949020065 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534188034188 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0054561129 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.625 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406279211266 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202260370409 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110284588528 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285802669779 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102386155485 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.