In some cultures old people are valued more, while in other cultures youth is considered more valuable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
People across the world are divided on the issue which factor is more crucial that old people are more valued or youngster. This is because, both views have their own aspects. Keeping this debate in view it is worthwhile to analyze both view point before reaching a reasonable solutions.
Those who support the former view point putting for their first argument by saying that old individuals have life experience. Indeed, to my mind, with the help of experience they can solve the problem at once. Furthermore, they have more patience, modesty of life and work to tackle the deteriorate of circumstance. Last but not least, some statistics are revealed that before knowing the issue they could judgment about mishap.
Those who support latter view point putting for their first argument by saying that youngsters do work with enthusiasm and zeal. Moreover, their energy level always at peak and they can do work in any whether and any condition. Over and above, according to the survey, establish by well conducted by well establish newspaper, “Hindustan Times” found that 80% youngsters who have keen to do any kind of work in world. Over and above, it is undeniable that if they don’t have the life or work experience to do work but because of energy and keen, new ideas and concepts, they can complete their work before time.
Having examined both view points thoroughly I would like to assert that both notions have their own merits. In my perspective the opportunity should be bestow to youth. Keeping this in view youngster exist more valuable then old employees. Therefore, I am more inclined to go in favor on latter view point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98561151079 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59830778659 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543165467626 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6315480471 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158248645069 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066599706378 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673112398665 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129843965826 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944584901811 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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