Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read newspaper and magazines from that country.
new Roman",serif;mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">Throughout the history humankind has always wanted to become familiar with other people and their culture. Scholars are always looking for best ways to get to know other countries. A controversial question is whether reading newspapers and magazines from a foreign country is the best way to learn about that country. Although some people might agree with this statement I contend that it is not correct. In the following I will describe the most significant reasons describing my viewpoint.
new Roman",serif;mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">The first reason to be mentioned is that there are a lot of other ways to learn about a foreign country. Nowadays universe is becoming smaller because of the social networks and they have a huge effect in bringing people closer. Today we can easily become friends with someone who is on the other side of earth and speak through the video by means of new technologies. so it is not only easy but also very fun to be in touch with people from other countries and learn about their culture. so technology has made a lot of oppurtunities for people who want to learn about another countries.
new Roman",serif;mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">The second reason to be mentioned is that newspapers and magazines include a limited range of information. most of magazines are about fashion or science which includes a small portion of information we require to know a foreign country. also newspapers are mainly about daily problems and news in a country and do not include country’s history or traditions which are very important in getting familiar with another country.
new Roman",serif;mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">The last but not least reason is that in order to know a foreign country the best way is travelling there. By visiting a country one would experience the environment of that country and would have a chance to socialize with people of that country which will give idea about that country’s culture. The closer a person could get to a country and its culture the more he will understand them. so the best way to learn about a foreign country is travelling there.
new Roman",serif; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">so to wrap it up, there are many ways to know a distant country. knowing a distant country is now made easier by means of technology which has bring people closer from all over the world. technology has made contacting people from around the world easier and thus easier to learn each others culture. Moreover, magazines and newspapers contain little information about a country’s culture and history and they mainly discuss a special field such as fashion or daily news. so they are not comprehensive sources to learn about a foreign country’s culture. also the best way to become familiar with a country is by travelling and experiencing it closely and by person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2983.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41505376344 4.8611393121 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.1905648735 2.67179642975 381% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421505376344 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 883.8 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6583139065 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.695652174 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2173913043 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235712116686 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116786682144 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116457861988 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178417801397 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427035438871 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.96 10.9000537634 183% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.