Some people argue that space exploration had more to do with national pride than international effort.
To what extent do you agree with this?
How do you think space exploration will change in the future?
Space experiment is considered as a national achievement than international work by a group of people because it is commonly as a country's project than international project. I predict that the number of people who go to cosmic will increase and the price will affordable in the future.
Most of space experiments are done by the government as their own research, and they allocate a lot of money for this research. Many countries compete each other to do the best research for space tourism. For example, China and Russia are the countries that focus on space tourism in the last decade and both of them try to launch a holiday packages to the moon. Thus, many people claim those countries have a sophisticated technology like a jet set used to go to subordinate lunar. Therefore, it could not claim as an international effort.
Space exploration may become a well-known destination in next 10 years since many people are interested in join this kind of vacations. For example, since The Big Moon, one of travel agencies based in China, released their program to the moon in 2017, the number of visitors has rise gradually each year and it is predictable that this sector will be more commonly. Furthermore, as the number of space tourists will be higher, the cost will be more affordable than before. To illustrate, the price for one trip is $250,000 and the tourists are 10, so the cost will be around $25,000 per person compared with 25 tourists, the price will be lower. Hence, it will lead the space tourism as a common destination.
To conclude, I contend that space exploration may allow a country to have a better image in around the world since mostly, the project is owned by one country and this sector will be less expensive, and the number of people who experience this amazing trip will be higher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...oon in 2017, the number of visitors has rise gradually each year and it is predictab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75316455696 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72027495853 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2679421589 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224015145248 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837032674123 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398698463878 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136860768355 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192304561896 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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