A friend you made while you are studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in your local country. You have about a job in your local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. in your letter
1. tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
2. say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
3. explain how to apply for job
Dear Grace,
How are you doing? Am of the mind the letter meets you well. I really do miss the time we shared while I was abroad studying, they are quite good memories.
Recently, there is a vacancy for the position of a receptionist in the company and I think you should apply. The responsibilities of the job includes customer care services, monitoring the punctuality of the staffs and time each staff clocks out for the day.
However, I think the job is suitable for you with regards to your qualification, your strength of emotional intelligence and how coordinated your personality. Remember you had an intern job at Ford Motors and a receptionist an d as such it counts as experience.
Furthermore, send your resume and application letter to the Human Resources manager of the company, the contact can be seen on the company's website.
Be hopeful, however I wish you all the best.
Your Sincerely
James Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Grace, How are you doing? Am of the mind the le...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the mind the letter meets you well. I miss the time we shared while I was abro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ludes customer care services, monitoring punctuality of the staffs and time each ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03355704698 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00943668437 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657718120805 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6042014952 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38512867749 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133439996478 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756023041948 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176479839215 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871107029257 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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