Do you agree or disagree that you should be creative to be successful?
All of us want to be successful in his work or school. There is a special idea that makes you unique and different in your attitude is the range of your mental abilities, So I agree that to be successful you must be creative.
To begin with, the success in the school means that to have high marks beside delivering many clever practical projects, the same in the work successful means that to create solutions to many dilemmas that will increase the profit like reducing the time consumed in something or to ease many processes with more safe manner. This means that creativity always establishes solutions to improve the level of the institution you belong to, besides that the offering high quality of work. For instance, I was working in an airplane manufacturer company, I created a small change in designing the engines for reducing and shorten the pipes inside, which this led to reduce the cost of pipes bought as well as to reduce the repairing and checking the time on the engine by the mechanic's stuff.
Second, the successful provides you in many privileges or services because of your good feedback like the trust, appreciation, and respect as well as the extra money will be added to the salary as a motivation. In addition, I think that a good environment will trigger you to do your best. For example, one of the professors in my major has changed the syllabus to have more practical hours by adding a long training session to help us to be closer to the careers exist in the country, all the student found this nice so they hired in jobs faster than the old generation, the doctor also got on much good feedback and respect from the company to rise up their employee attitudes.
In conclusion, I believe that creativity always give you special attention and privileges, and the all will be proud that you belong to them, so you should work hard on your skills and to express your idea to reach the creativity.
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- The altruism in animals and humans 78
- some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed, other people believe that zoos serve useful functions,which view point do you support? 70
- Do you agree or disagree that you should be creative to be successful? 70
- about putting barrier TED on the boat. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6432748538 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57296650374 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.354193902 48.9658058833 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.444444444 100.406767564 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.6045352989 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7777777778 5.45110844103 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334288894481 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151209997729 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115576004595 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233430284274 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125290163306 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 11.7677419355 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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