Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give yout own opinion.
There is a debating issue between some people about how to reach for a better health conditions in society. Some say that we should develop sports, while others argue that we can achieve this task by introducing other solutions instead of improving sports. In my point of view, there are some effective ways of solving the problems related to health which are more important than building up sports.
On the one hand, sports facilities have a big role in our life, especially in case of improving massive health. We can take any person as an example who take parts in sport activities usually tends to be more healthy. Additionally, the contribution of sports is incredibly important for young generations. At this point, we can not ignore the advantages of sports facilities.
On the other hand, there are considerably problems that can not be solved only by developing sports industry. For example, people who live in industrial zones usually suffer from air pollution or there are lack of pharmaceutical products in border areas. In such occasions, we should take some steps on the way of improving public health. There are some issues to pay more attention, for instance, we can invest on medical services or pharm industry in order to diminish health problems. At this point, improving sports facilities may not be initial measure.
To sum up all above, we can not reject the importance of sports in healthcare system, but there are some cases may appear in front of society that could not be tackled only with the measures related to sports conditions. Therefore, sometimes we have to look by another standpoint, if we want to make effective solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14869888476 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.128115285 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4682085103 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 346.25 106.682146367 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.25 20.7667163134 324% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.25 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235438959988 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143359307918 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462885036395 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143359307918 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462885036395 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.5 13.0946893788 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 50.2224549098 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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