Sports programmes are very popular on television nowadays. Some people argue that these programmes are the reason for the poor health of many young people as they prefer to watch sports rather than partake in them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
The televisions braodcast some kinds of sport which influences young people become more like to watch the programs rather than playing sport and it has caused youngster cannot maintain their health. I disagree with this statement. In contrast, it will make everyone more loving the workout.
people who are interesting for sport programs on tv such as football, basketball, badminton, etc, usually, have a same pattern in reality. If they like watching football on screen, it will stimulate their mind to carry out the same thing in real life. Therefore, it affects their body to be more healthy. Thus, they can also learn several techniques from what they watch on video and usually they are discussing it with their partners and exercising it the field or hall. For example, when the teenagers look how the jumping smash of badminton players or how to make a better netting to defeat their rival, then, everyone who has the same anxiety will imitate the badminton player skill.
Due to that fact, in my point of view, sport program on tube is not a cause of unhealthy young people. In contrast, it can be a learning media to involve society loving the sport. For instance, only a few persons knowing the Futsal Sport in the past. However, because tv influence, it could spread worldwide as fast as possible and majority citizens adore this sport today.
In conclusion, there is no relation between poor health of youngsters and broadcasting sport. On the contrary, it becomes the reason why the community can maintain their physical fitness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ke everyone more loving the workout. people who are interesting for sport programs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53104686342 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3920172296 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228363746534 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07073303666 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658127783972 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139836402209 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05049640048 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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