Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
1. Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
3. Give details of when you would be available for this work
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing about an advert which I saw in the local newspaper for unpaid work at hospital and thus would like to inform you of my interest to do this volunteering job.
To elucidate I am a full-time student at a local university additionally I am also associated with many non-government organizations which help poor sections of the society by providing financial aid in which my role is mainly to raise awareness in the society by holding public events and collection of funds. The work associated with these organizations is unpaid but this volunteer work motivates me and also keeps me in a positive frame of mind thus I am interested in your advert.
As my previous experience with the non-government organizations has been related to financial work like accounting, preparing invoices for the donations and collection of funds thus I would prefer to have the same work at the hospital. Since I have to attend college during weekdays I would only be available for the job during weekends.
I look forward to your immediate response on the same.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90526315789 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00278725552 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3090727813 44.8134815571 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.5 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355866312892 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142411024422 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904258036466 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194410624754 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112316489211 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.