In holidays shop must be closed or open
Nowadays business notion is jumping in leaps and bounds which only provokes the benefits according to its way. In the virtue of rendering conveniences, business persons are very fervent to grab the lump sum of profits by hook or crook. But monotonous business works demand not to keep shop open which is called leisure. Conversely, in case of capturing customers furtively, in the holiday shop should be opened according to my opinion.
To embark on, all academic, official people remain free on the weekend day. Basically, in the onset of leisure, they plan how they enjoy the day with their own accord. More or fewer people are earnest to travel a museum, a park or intend to go to the market because of shopping. So if the market is closed in this day, they will lose their keenness to go outside. More precisely it is said that in such case those who are a market lover, they have to only fantasize of marketing. What I mean by this is that it will be favorable to them not to tread their legs in the market. Consequently, market owners will feel a deficiency of their unique customer. Moreover, we know that this type of customer is instinctive to make the market, so from them, it will be easy to make a profit in the eye of policy. Which is why I think, on the weekend day if shops are kept open, the more the profit will be got the sellers; the more <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">fantasy</span> the customer <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">takes</span>. From my personal experience, I have a weekend day which shows me a way of marketing. The last couple of days ago, I went to a market, but so discombobulated not to find the most of the part open. In result, I could not buy my sumptuous zinc and new brand shirt. In reality, I barely get a chance to go to the shop, so I have not yet bought my desired shirt.
In addition, in the unavoidable cases, we feel the advantages of keeping the shop open. Whenever a lot of people keep themselves in the room, there is a huge chance tocome down with diseases accidentally or any sinister works. Besides people can face any hazardous accident in this day that invariably demands a free road, doctor etc. Mostly we feel the need for a pharmacist, but all shops are closed. For example, My grandfather became ill on a weekend and we could not get any pharmacy open to take medicine. That's why it is far better to keep the shop open on the holiday.
Finally, if the shop is not open in off day, all roads seem empty. There is no least of hustle and bustle. If we want to travel a museum or park, it will not only cumbersome but also our endeavors will be nipped in the bud. Moreover empty and desolate places are very bothering to the mind of tender people. That's why they don't go outside; just enjoy merriment in keeping themselves constrained in the room. More often than not this scenario spoils their mobility to enjoy life and they only fantasize to take snacks in a restaurant.
To wrap it up, it will be favorable for the sellers and buyers to keep the shop open. Moreover, the surrounding atmosphere will face a great impact on lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: Besides,
...ses accidentally or any sinister works. Besides people can face any hazardous accident ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...get any pharmacy open to take medicine. Thats why it is far better to keep the shop o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ur endeavors will be nipped in the bud. Moreover empty and desolate places are very both...
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Suggestion: That's
...bothering to the mind of tender people. Thats why they dont go outside; just enjoy me...
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, conversely, finally, if, moreover, so, for example, i mean, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56583629893 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06083131515 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485765124555 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8741295891 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7741935484 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1290322581 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67741935484 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226668751678 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598953214402 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850266253775 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142493563192 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433264004446 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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