In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in different parts of the world, industries and businesses is frequently to be moved local locations where remote the megacities. That lead to more benefits but also drawbacks.
On the one hand, business of industries and businesses in regional areas will create peaceful enviroment to develop. Firstly, There are less competition than the big cities, they can expand their goods market, beside that avoiding further overcrowding in cities will have fresh airs. Secondly, Local locations have a lot of space for building the big companies or large industries. Thirdly, Business activities in regional areas are cost lower than the megacities, for instance: matiarials for building or expense of commuting are cheaper cities. Finally, local business also help industries unaffected of city economy.
On the other hand, business of industries and businesses in local areas may less more opportunities for brand developing. They couldn’t be able to enhance facilities, for example: transporting material construction from cities is quite expensive. Moreover, clients in local location are quite few because of poorness in areas. Their business will be difficulted to adapt with global economy is caused by moving industries and businesses. Besides, employees in areas don’t have specialist skills and they are hardly to broaden horizon.
In conclusion, transferring industries and businesses to regional areas outside the mega cities result in benefits and drawbacks but it was a good ideal of government to help people more own lands for different things or building park and reserves.
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- The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. 67
- In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less much'?
Suggestion: less much
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56275303644 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95837580637 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2394223165 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3076923077 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223862069084 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800209876824 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618865649414 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138134323746 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383913455008 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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