Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
That nowadays make a plan for the people life profoundly is principal. A question which is highly debatable is, whether the younger adult has to have a plan for the future. Although, some people strongly believe that having the plan and organization have a negative effect on human life. Nevertheless, I believe that it is pivotal for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
First of all, one of the persuasive reasons that authenticate the thesis is that have a plan for all aspects of life bring for young people successful future. It would not be too great an exaggeration to say that nowadays, due to the proliferation of the population with high-level of knowledge, many young people have to work each time to enhance their ability to compete with other people. In fact, finding job ties to both knowledge and education of young people. Therefore, improving opportunities to get a suitable job in order to have a successful future need to the appropriate plan and organization, For instance, my brother hs the ability to plan for each minute of his life, and he planned to be a great doctor. However, he is a hard-working individual and by organizing his life and hard-working he could achieve his goal. There are no doubt many more examples, but this is one real story that clearly shows planning for all aspects of life and each time brings us a great future.
In addition, management the time play a key role in younger people life. Broadly speaking, wasting time for social networks and the online game is big issues which young people face every day and every time. To clarify, not only planning time has a crucial effect on younger people life, but also it can help people to spend time on important things. For instance, my friend never takes into account the time, and they do not plan for their future life. Thus, they waste their time and money for online gaming on the internet. All in all, the role of planning that play in young people life is enormous.
In conclusion. although there are many who believe that planning for future increase the complexity of life. I disagree. I think if people want to have a successful future, they need to make a plan for each time of their life. I strongly believe that the well-organized life helps young people to manage their time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
That nowadays make a plan for the people life profoundly i...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ple life is enormous. In conclusion. although there are many who believe that plannin...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ake a plan for each time of their life. I strongly believe that the well-organize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, broadly speaking, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71358024691 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61503047642 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454320987654 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1926370473 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.473684211 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73684210526 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331214360978 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121310502086 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790507131412 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240728633775 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511715523646 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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