In these days people are not eating healthy and not exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to stop this behaviour?
Nowadays, despite of awareness and education many people still lead unhealthy lifestyle and suffer health issues. Majority of people today have poor eating habits and they spend negligible time on exercise. Reasons for such development are discussed further and some solutions to this problem are also provided further.
There are various factors that force people to adopt such lifestyle. First of all, twenty four hours working culture of modern world do not allow people to spare time for healthy activities. In present working environment, job is round the clock and may change every now and then. So, people fail to devote same amount of time on such activities of fitness as their schedule may change very often. Adding to it, long working hours force people to consume convenience snacks and packaged items. Another reason for this upcoming trend is the electronic entertainment sources like television, computer, and internet etcetera. With such luxury facilities available people do not prefer to go out for entertainment or peruse sports.
However, there are plenty of solutions to mitigate this problem. Firstly, it depends on mentality of people, people must decide to eat healthy and devote time to exercising, and spending time on easy exercise like morning walk can keep people free from many diseases and keep them active throughout the day. Also, government and companies should make it sure that people must spend enough time to exercise by organising sports and other healthy events. The most important is the eating habits and there should be more awareness among society about the value of healthy diet. Consumption of junk and convenience food available is the biggest culprit of downing health, thus avoiding such food and preferring homemade food with more of veggies and fruits can keep health at its peak.
To recapitulate, the modern lifestyle is responsible of unhealthy life of people today. So, only conscious efforts can mitigate this problem and improve heath of the today’s society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
... to adopt such lifestyle. First of all, twenty four hours working culture of modern world d...
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Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
..., job is round the clock and may change every now and then. So, people fail to devote same amount ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27244582043 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57048366057 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0304235807 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227775823512 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067169129792 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398718191082 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127240458466 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318022093795 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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