You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and
say
– Describe the equipment.
– Ask for the features and specifications of this equipment.
– Explain why your company needs this equipment.
Dear Sir,
I am an employee of the Systel Industries and had recently visited the manufacturing plant of the water purifiers that your company sells. I am writing this letter to enquire more about your product and regarding its need for the employees of my company.
There were various sorts of purifiers for display when I had visited your factory, each with different features. However, the most unique filter that interested me was the one which had capabilities of purifying and providing both hot and cold water as output based on user needs. The current system to purify
waters in our company does not have this feature and there has been suggestions by many employees to incorporate the same. Since a majority of staff prefer to drink a mixture of cold and hot water, it is a pain for them to every time use the coffee machine to fill their bottles cup by cup. As a result, it would be great to have the product of your company at our office so that the workers can benefit from it.
In addition, it would be helpful if you would provide me the details about the specifications and technology used to make these dual filters.
I will be waiting for a response from your company.
Yours faithfully,
Khyati Damani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...h with different features. However, the most unique filter that interested me was the one w...
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Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...user needs. The current system to purify waters in our company does not have this...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69585253456 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52937886408 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0199954566 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185393303579 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720377163294 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489642315808 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900518576957 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536087010892 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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