Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
it is an undeniable fact, that the childhood is considered as the most important period of a human. We observe the world, know and speak with people or socializing, learn and etc. In my view, childhood can also be considered as the happiest time of a person's life. I will give some plausible explanations to bolster my opinion.
Firstly, childhood is related with abundance of time. we did not have to go to meetings and events. Instead, we could watch cartoons on TV, play football with friends and eat ice cream without being concerned about the following day. only this reason must mark childhood as the happiest time.
Secondly, when you are a child, you usually do not have any serious obligations. The only few things that you really had to do were brush your tooth and listen to parents. In contrast, an adult has so many assignments and obligations, that eat up all the time and there is no any opportunity to spend it on family or entertainment. A child lives without that fuss and can spend all the day to have fun and enjoy it.
Thirdly, childhood is a perfect time to learn. A young brain is better equipped for studying, especially something new. Now we have ample evidence, that there are children who know two or three languages, because a child learns better and more efficient. when you are an adult, you are accustomed to the world around and know how something works, but the majority of children is so eager to know the world and they do it with pleasure because it is new for them.
What conclusion can be drawn from this? If we aggregate all the benefits of childhood I enumerated, we can arrive at conclusion that this period of time has so many advantages and opportunities, that it can undoubtedly considered as the happiest time in person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66984126984 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70023467901 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9754194106 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7222222222 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252694126041 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892565982037 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138289811092 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152621937452 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973862543569 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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