Many students do not finish school. Why is this, and how can the problem be
solved?
Education is considered to be a key in the development of an individual. This essay chalk out the factors when kids drop out of schools and the ways to address this issue.
One of the many reasons why students drop out from school is lack of interest in studies. For some, studies may always be an inclination while others may find their interest in Arts, Sports or some other fields. Secondly, lack of finances from poor families make children leave their education. For example, when I was young, a friend of mine had to leave school as his father was a Farmer and they could hardly afford his academic expenses. He was made to work with his father in the fields instead.
While this may be considered a problem for some, there have been cases where leaving studies mid-way proved to be a better career option for others. For instance, it is hard to ignore the fact that people like Sachin Tendulkar, too, had an incomplete education. No one would ever question this huge cricket star about his academics because of the name he has earned. Hence, rather than forcing the children to study and get good grades, one should focus on the individual’s interest and help him or her in enhancing those skills.
To conclude, an incomplete education does not become a problem until and unless the student understands the pros and cons of it. In my opinion, parents should guide their kids to be a better human being irrespective of the level of education they have received.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71042471042 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53222989676 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9079565023 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8461538462 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119284885371 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428716965801 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624090982549 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727710661128 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204242065399 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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