It is important that we maintain and protect the beautiful building of the past, even if it is expensive for countries to do so.
Do you agree with this statement?
Buildings are being constructed to cater to housing needs, offices, shopping complex, etc. Every now and then a new building is being constructed using better technology and compliments modern cities. In this essay, I will discuss whether old buildings should be protected even if it is costly for the landlords to maintain them.
There is a growing competition among various nations to build the best in class buildings with all the modern amenities. They are building skyscrapers to showcase their strength and economic superiority. For instance, Dubai is building a new tower which will be the tallest in the world and will have modern offices, shopping centres and luxurious hotels to mention a few. However, in doing so, the government shouldn't ignore the importance of buildings of the past.
Old buildings are the symbol of our history and are of great archaeological importance to the nation. They should be protected in order to retain the historic roots on which the nation is built. For example, there are various monuments which are covered by Indian archaeological department as important buildings and are protected. An adequate government support should be in place to help in the maintenance of these buildings.
It is undeniable that modern building in today's world is a necessity for any nation to grow but the old buildings should also be given the due importance they deserve. In my opinion, it is essential that beautiful old buildings are preserved, however, there should be some support from the government in ensuring their safety and maintenance.
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. 73
- Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. 78
- One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle this problem by taking more refugees. 73
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. 73
- To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: Now and then
... needs, offices, shopping complex, etc. Every now and then a new building is being constructed usi...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...w. However, in doing so, the government shouldnt ignore the importance of buildings of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20784313725 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87861301986 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537254901961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2099210444 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21810699364 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860840494412 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755065943883 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134515344846 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392441950736 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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