It is generally believed that the Internet it is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
it is perceived by everybody that internet usages is the most appropriate way of communicating while some individuals believed that there are other means of getting information. In my opinion, i believe that information can be gotten through other different ways.This will be explained In details in my essay discussion.
To begin with,people can converse with one another and be updated with the current information by reading news papers.it is not everybody that have access to the internet, so by reading the hard copy of news papers, gives they the privilege of knowing what is happening in the environment. The Nigeria statistic showed recently on CNN , gives that there are free reader clubs everywhere in each community which allows them to read papers .
Again , visiting of people this modern days have given the society the opportunity to be aware of what is going on around them.people get vital news which makes they to be socially aware by talking with each other when they see themselves, by speaking about what is happening both internationally and locally. For instance, it was shown on television that passes information to and fro by paying home visit .
In conclusion with, the use of internet is not the only way by which people can get the recent update or to communicate with each other.Because there are other ways and it also effective such as the by reading news paper and exchange of visit among the community members so as to get informed.
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| 2019-05-18 | Falola helen Oluwatoyin | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, speaking about, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9918699187 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83888428788 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0940773372 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.428571429 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1428571429 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7142857143 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150671386682 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729032540845 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558705082088 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960128858243 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564948497045 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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