People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is true that people living in large cities today face numerous problems on a daily basis at an alarming rate. There are a number of problems behind this point and several solutions should be adopted to deal with these problems.
There are various problems that people have to face in daily routine when they live in large cities. Extraordinary, there are two primary problems in term of social and environment. One reason is that environmental pollution is serious issue due to the rate of people caring. Nowadays, large cities suffer smog densely from numerous factories or vehicle, even moving people could not see the road to control car. According to the Vietnam statistic in 2018, the number of people with respiratory diseases has reached 500 people. That is alarming number showing the rate of highly environmental pollution in here. Another reason is that social problems involves in the youth. Large city means social’s vice is developing, thus adolescents often find it easy to fall into anti social behavior. Especially, some people use drug and alcohol making them could not control themselves, even they could not distinguish between right and wrong. As far as I know, on March 6, a person using over drug, hence he broke into the people’s houses and killed 3 people in the house.
Due to urgent problems, governments measure to give people some solutions to innovate several situations. One person raised the question: should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns to prevent problems. In my opinion, this is a temporary way but not sustainable. Moreover, if people transferred to smaller cities, large cities would turn into the dead cities. Instead of moving from big city to smaller one, people could discipline awareness by themselves strictly in order to avoid problems. Or governments apply the law definitely to mitigate maximize problems. For instance, governments extend work hour in order that people do not go out at the same time. Since then, large cities decrease in smog because of vehicle. In term of social problems, governments give some heavy punishments to correct the people awareness. Therefore, there are various ways could help people without moving to smaller regional towns.
In conclusion, only by purely addressing of governments, the rate of problems in large cities would reduce significantly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21409921671 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75191115739 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3694003795 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8260869565 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.652173913 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420033299537 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113756957968 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817079219084 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244303954809 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728014833046 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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