You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Mark,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter in reference to inform you that I have moved to a new house.
To elucidate the main reasons for the movement were limited space availability and lack of modern amenities moreover it used to take plenty of travel time from my office which used to affect my leisure activities. The new condominium is a spacious three two bedroom flat located at the outskirts of the city much closer to my office. It provides all the modern facilities like a gym, swimming pool, sauna and 24 hours security. Additionally, due to its superb location, you can see the panoramic view of the beautiful lake from the alfresco part of the apartment which can rejuvenate your mind.
Why don’t you come over this weekend on Saturday? I am inviting all my college friends for a small house warming party. I believe it will a great opportunity to meet our old friends and have some fun.
I look forward to your response.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, How have you been? It has been a long ti...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'flat' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'flats'.
Suggestion: flats
...ominium is a spacious three two bedroom flat located at the outskirts of the city mu...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eet our old friends and have some fun. I look forward to your response. Warm wi...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to your response. Warm wishes Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61202185792 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54545115221 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693989071038 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.057014627 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269150249537 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881499777836 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993755439156 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161365425796 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967072928702 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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