You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Jacob,
How is your shoulder and I hope it is healing well? I'm writing to update you on the outcome of the tournament between Chelsea and Chel football Club.
As you know, the game was scheduled for March 19, 2019 and it was held as promised. Gladly, our team won the game narrowly with a two goals to one to the opposing team. Although, the game was though because Chelsea scored first within twenty seconds the started. This put so much pressure on us knowing we could not afford to lose the match and be kicked out of the tournament.
it was a rainy day as the weather was cloudy all through the day and we had to play the match inside the drizzling. I think we did well as a team but we would have done better if you were around to play the defence role in the game. The team misses you and we cannot wait to have you back
Please rest well and I wish you a speedy recovery.
Regards,
Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...shoulder and I hope it is healing well? Im writing to update you on the outcome of...
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...on the outcome of the tournament between Chelsea and Chel football Club. As...
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...elsea scored first within twenty seconds the started. This put so much pressure o...
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...nd be kicked out of the tournament. it was a rainy day as the weather was clou...
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...wish you a speedy recovery. Regards, Jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25142857143 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08903844691 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1554454605 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210209570148 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726426103936 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588473270832 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11804071578 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395901600953 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.