Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that most nations in the world are improving their economic status. However, it is believed that a range of social worth is diminishing as a consequence. I personally adhere to this opinion, that the advantages of economic development are outweighed by disadvantages.
On the one hand, stable and healthy economic development really helps people live more conveniently. Since without money in the pocket, struggling to survive is already challenging for humans, let alone for leading an interesting life and do whatever they want. For example, in the previous century, a great number of Vietnamese poor children could not go to school to obtain knowledge as their parents could not afford the fees; besides, they had to work on the farm to help feed their family. These days, hence the country becomes wealthier, people no longer have to ponder on basic needs. In addition, they may have a chance to nurture other aspects of life, such as mental health or their own hobbies. In other words, economic growth makes humans' life more completed.
On the other hand, everything has its own price and there is no exception for this matter. To boost economics, numerous countries decided to trade off several precious social values as well as traditional traits, and the consequence is miserable. Japan, for instance, abandoned its own Lunar new year holiday and celebrate the new year coincidentally with Western people, so that it will not miss any opportunity to do business with them while taking different time being off work. Another example is China, which had to pay the penalty for making progress in the industry regardless of the environment. As a result, the level of air pollution recently is so alarming that residents in some areas could not see the sun due to a huge amount of dust being airborne.
In conclusion, I believe that economic growth is necessary; however, people should perform it while taking other social factors into account carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, incidentally, may, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06422018349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73996559466 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8636362716 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136623492896 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455776995295 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422593524645 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886383388902 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052954861928 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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