Some people say that government should give priority to health care whereas others say they should spend on other important priorities. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People have different arguments for allocation of funds by the government. Some believe that government should spend money on health care facilities. Others ,however ,think that authorities should improve other facilities which is more advantageous for the masses. This essay intends to analyse both viewpoints. I personally side with the latter view.
On the one hand, spending money on health facilities benefit people for all age groups. If more health centers are there,people can be treated well manner without any difficulty of seats and they also not move to other cities for treatment. Improving healthcare facilities may lead to happy and healthier society, which is helpful to improve the standard of life. To exemplify ,if healthcare services are at reasonable prices because of support from government's organisations. It could became affordable for poor people to get treatment of disease without economical burden.
On the other hand , some people believe that authorities should give more importance to other facilities such as sports, education etc. Schools should be built in large numbers because every citizen have a right to education ,which is mandatory and essential in today's world. It should also build gymnasium and playgrounds for physical development of citizens. For higher studies, in government colleges,fees should be less so that they can make their career and became successful person in life.
In my opinion,apart from education government should spend money on transportation,which is undoubtedly used by almost all the people of the country. Construction of roads is definitely useful for youngsters to old age people.establishing small industries in cities also provide much more opportunities for unemployed youth.
To wrap it all, even though spending money on health care services is major source for betterment of society, development in transportation , education and other facilities is also mandatory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, apart from, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62711864407 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18132110916 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3937126429 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276520495779 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917544327826 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857364323328 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161544791198 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743285635528 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.