The animal experimentation.
The animal experimentation is very dificult issue with a lots of people feeling very strongly of
it, we are use the animals for the experimentation in diferent way, one of most big problem
is for test the cosmetics, the images of animals with things put in there eyes for so we are
able to look a bit better make many people very angry. Is it necessary. The companies such as
the body shop said that they do not experiment on animals and they produce good cosmetics
who make money, I am not agree that making the cosmetics that make our faces better does
not mean the animals must suffering in terrible ways, it does not seem moral for me. On the
other hand we also use the animals for test the new drugs. Without these new drugs people
die and suffer when they need not, some of the people believe that the animals should not
suffer and die so that we can avoid it, I am not agree here, these people will change the
minds when it is they who are die or one of their children, it is sad that the animals have to
suffer for this thing but here I believe that the suffering is justify. Is there alternative
to the animal experimentation. I‛m not expert but I dont think so, the monkeys are most
near biology animals and without test to them, we cannot sure of affects of the new drugs,
we test on humans also but only when we know the drugs not a problem to us, the testing on
humans without the tests on the animals could make the tragedies. So in conclusion I do not
believe that the animal testing is justify for not esential things but for esential things I
believe that there is not choice and it is justify.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 77
- Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special courses Discuss those two views 81
- The animal experimentation. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...rimentation is very dificult issue with a lots of people feeling very strongly of it,...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ood cosmetics who make money, I am not agree that making the cosmetics that make our...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ple die and suffer when they need not, some of the people believe that the animals should ...
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Line 10, column 50, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...d die so that we can avoid it, I am not agree here, these people will change the min...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... will change the minds when it is they who are die or one of their children, it is sad...
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Line 12, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
...ut here I believe that the suffering is justify. Is there alternative to the animal ex...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...l experimentation. I‛m not expert but I dont think so, the monkeys are most near bi...
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Line 17, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
...not believe that the animal testing is justify for not esential things but for esentia...
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Line 18, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
...ieve that there is not choice and it is justify.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3680781759 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29762021748 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446254071661 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.157720368 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.625 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.375 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27195191782 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174745162524 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206522049754 0.0667982634062 309% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939192610866 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890551744456 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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