teachers
that in the past few years, society was grateful and thankful to teachers. But others suggest that teacher in these days be appreciated by our community as well. With my perspective I concur with the second group of people whose agree that teachers are much appreciated by our community and that what seems very reasonable to me because of numerous reasons why I subscribed to a distinct attitude elaborating cogently in subsequent paragraphs.
The first reason coming to my mind consolidating my standpoint is nowadays, technology is one of important aspect in our world. It consider a collection of techniques, skills, and production of goods and services in this life. Teachers now have unlimited access to this technology without any limitation and that one of the essential issue for teachers to improve their methods and skills as well. for instance, teachers can provide additional information and modeling by just one finger press. So, that's why I poses that our society and the government also being very grateful and thankful toward teachers by giving this accessibility to all kind of technology.
Second reason I have to give it some attention is the parents paly an important role in student's life. By helping their children during their duties like for example: Some parents help their kids by assisting them during home-works, tests, and attending meetings also. All that help it seems to be helping the teachers as well to evaluate their students in properly way. Furthermore, that will build the students future and raise their fundamental knowledge. In fact, some studies claimed that the ration of intelligent among students become increased in this century. And the reason for that it because parents whose part of the society being assist teachers as kind of appreciation.
Additionally, I do believe that plethora of people in this world become very grateful to them teachers epically the teachers whose influence their lives in great way. Teachers are the foundations of our life and without being thankful will impact our future in an accebtable way
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
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Message: Did you mean 'considers'?
Suggestion: considers
...ne of important aspect in our world. It consider a collection of techniques, skills, and...
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Suggestion: For
...prove their methods and skills as well. for instance, teachers can provide addition...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... modeling by just one finger press. So, thats why I poses that our society and the go...
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pose'
Suggestion: pose
... just one finger press. So, thats why I poses that our society and the government als...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...me-works, tests, and attending meetings also. All that help it seems to be helping t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 22.412803532 201% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 338.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16272189349 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79344625325 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51775147929 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0087101788 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0625 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324909923848 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121424219886 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116818776729 0.0662205650399 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23090689248 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856214224899 0.0443174109184 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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