Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Artificial intelligence is believed to rapidly develop and exert tremendous effects on our future lives. However, some individual are concerned about the future in which smart machines outsmart human kind. While A.I has been improving and positively affecting our society, I would argue that it is possible that computer can probably be wiser than us.
On the one hand, the invention of artificial intelligence has been significantly beneficial for human nowadays and undoubtedly in the near future. Firstly, smart robots programmed are commonly multitasking that I can do various work at once. Therefore, entrepreneurs can earn more profits by using intelligent machinery production system instead of recruiting employees. Secondly, computers could replace human in some severe work conditions. For example, scientists have sent thousands of smart devices to other planets in order to carry out various project that people can hardly do such as analysing the air or soil in there.
On the other hand, computer’s brilliance causes people’s fear about the future human being. It is thought that unemployment rate, and job competitiveness would soar up if organizations reduce hiding worker and take advantage of machines instead. The ideal may be reasonable because computers have ability to work nonstop and hardly mistaken while some people may disqualified for their position . moreover, that modern citizens overuse and depend greatly on computers results in sedentary habit or even the degradation of human brain. So the development of those devices may pose a threat to human kind.
As far as I am concerned, while intelligent machines would improve our lives in the future, the potential risks of such technologies should be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51838235294 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05855322273 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6434462395 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258870312679 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799123399729 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603345948246 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149187927876 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396950206348 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.