In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why?
Currently, the whole society faces excessive pressure from daily lives and full-time jobs, which will undoubtedly exert detrimental effects on both mental and physical health. Therefore, more and more people turn to do some aerobic exercise in public gym to release the pressure and enhance their health under this circumstance. However, the views of people vary when it comes to whether joining a group or doing exercise by oneself. Personally speaking, I reckon that I prefer exercise with others, and my views will elaborate on ample reasons as follows.
On one hand, at the aim of releasing pressure, exercising with others can help more. In another words, people will communicate with each other and come together to figure out what kinds of aerobic exercise are likely to be more beneficial. Admittedly, during this period, people will not only exercise effectively, but also can gain positive social relationship with strangers. take myself as an example, I really like playing basketball and are willing to exercise in this way. Once I played basketball on our campus gym, I met Lee, who was also addicted to basketball. We soon become best friends and play basketball together.
On the other hand, if people exercise with the members in a sports team, they are likely to take more professional guide, which will make their exercise scientific. Plus, people are vulnerable if they always do something which might so stressful and harmful to them. According to one research by Peking University, the absence of essential guide should take the responsibility of more than 80 percent of muscle harm accidents in campus gym course, some students even die for the lack of basic knowledge of exercise. What’s more, exercising with others can also give people a hand when they face some problems that they can’t grapple with.
In a nutshell, people can benefit a lot in exercise together for both mental health area and physical health area. I fully support people ought to do this for their own promising lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...ive social relationship with strangers. take myself as an example, I really like pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, i reckon, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11711711712 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66069794373 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5311963795 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237632088193 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856102653882 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532489023753 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154741322824 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352153517851 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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