It is a common aspiration among people to run their own business, rather that work for an employer. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people prioritize having their private business over being an employee and working under someone else’s supervision. In what follows it will be shown that the benefits of running entrepreneurship greatly outweigh any drawbacks.
Admittedly, people might face numerous obstacles while owning a business. Firstly, starting a business requires a high-risk investment. it is obvious that a few people can afford such amount of money. Moreover, the banks have certain limits when it comes to lending money for starting a business due to the risks of not paying back. Secondly, the majority of startup business companies find it challenging to get into the market. For instance, in our country, the market for the chocolate sector is governed by a huge company leaving almost no chances for the beginners who want to perform in this field.
Nevertheless, despite the disadvantages above, I believe that having a private business can be significantly beneficial. One of the main positive aspects of this is gaining the ability to make independent decisions. By being self-employed, people are forced to make various decisions regarding budget management, product quality, and even design. In the long run, this skill certainly can have a significant impact on their future career path. Another advantage of owning a business is earning more money. With the help of right strategies and successful business, people might be able to increase their profits in a short period.
In conclusion, owning a business brings more advantages such as the opportunity of being autonomous and is financially more profitable compared to any problems it causes. Furthermore, these minor issues can be cleverly tackled by initially taking proper actions.
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: getting
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ners who want to perform in this field. Nevertheless, despite the disadvantages ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53113553114 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98928480395 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2348848947 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179601219039 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536876318005 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424858296448 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102305294677 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372298481275 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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