Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true this statement? What can tourist do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Nowadays, tourism is growing rapidly that brings numerous benefits for both visitors and indigenous inhabitants, especially a huge income for local countries. Nevertheless, some people think that tourism affects negatively on culture and natural environment of country which has developed tourism. In my opinion, i strongly believe this argument completely true.
To begin with, the proportion of people who travel is increasing considerably that lead to negative impacts on the countries that people travel to. A typical example for that phenomenon is the harmful effects on the environment where visitors come to. A huge amount of garbage has been thrown into natural environment that make numerous environmental problems. Plastic bag is one of the most dangerous menace to natural life, they cause plant and sea animal deaths. In terms of the effect on culture, the visitor could come from many countries in the world, so they could bring many customs or habits which are not suitable for local inhabitant that might lead to the assimilation.
There are plenty of ways to prevent the negative effect of tourism on both environment and culture. The government or the authority who manage tourism areas can promulgate the guideline for protecting the environment to the visitor. For instance, the tourist might be severely punished by fining a large amount of money or clearing a part of tourism ares if they throw the garbage in the unauthorized places. Besides, the authority can encourage people utilize organic product which are environmental-friendly. About culture, the government could has appropriate regulations of culture exchange between visitor and local people. In order to avoid negative impact on social life or traditional custom of indigenous countries, the tourist who spread bad concept will be fined or even banned from entry that nation.
In conclusion, tourism brings a lot of benefits to country however it also cause numerous problems, the authority need to have appropriate solutions for all those issues to make tourism only brings advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38769230769 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95877153462 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3868952495 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.733333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341186425271 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110767569106 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866083355966 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197436585931 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650404483804 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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