should animals be the friends of people or should they be regarded as the sources of people 's food and shoshould animals be the friends of people or should they be regarded as the sources of people 's food and clothes? state your position with relevant example?
ought to animals be the companion of person or should they be consider as the way of dozens 's eat able and attire. I think that animals have full right live in the earth rather than human civilization. There are plethora reasons behind it.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming garagraph.
Nowadays,animals are widely used in umpteen areas. However, some people believe that animals have a meat and natural energy should be give power for adolescent. For instance, they eat food chain like dogs,fish,hens ,goat, rabbit, elephant and cat so on.They are eat only categories animals and then,they is very common in abroad centuries. Furthermore, they could be not care about animals life but also they always thought about animals only use synthetic product wool clothes in the winter.
Nevertheless,they are no denying the fact that,in my opinion,animals have full right live long regard to human life.Thus, animals have a feel and emotion and as well as aminals have very faithful,honest and diligent almost all work.For instance, denizens would be understand animals problem and ever, they have be good freinds.Last but not the least, government should be law allow about aminals safe. todays, all animals ratio reducing day by day.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon.I said down, animals are meat sources is hens,fishs and goats and give wild power for all age group like todders,kids, and primitive etc.other animals such as dolphins and horses act as source entertainment.uld animals be the friends of people or should they be regarded as the sources of people 's food and clothes? state your position with relevant example?
ought to animals be the companion of person or should they be consider as the way of dozens 's eat able and attire. I think that animals have full right live in the earth rather than human civilization. There are plethora reasons behind it.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming garagraph.
Nowadays,animals are widely used in umpteen areas. However, some people believe that animals have a meat and natural energy should be give power for adolescent. For instance, they eat food chain like dogs,fish,hens ,goat, rabbit, elephant and cat so on.They are eat only categories animals and then,they is very common in abroad centuries. Furthermore, they could be not care about animals life but also they always thought about animals only use synthetic product wool clothes in the winter.
Nevertheless,they are no denying the fact that,in my opinion,animals have full right live long regard to human life.Thus, animals have a feel and emotion and as well as aminals have very faithful,honest and diligent almost all work.For instance, denizens would be understand animals problem and ever, they have be good freinds.Last but not the least, government should be law allow about aminals safe. todays, all animals ratio reducing day by day.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon.I said down, animals are meat sources is hens,fishs and goats and give wild power for all age group like todders,kids, and primitive etc.other animals such as dolphins and horses act as source entertainment.clothes? state your position with relevant example?
ought to animals be the companion of person or should they be consider as the way of dozens 's eat able and attire. I think that animals have full right live in the earth rather than human civilization. There are plethora reasons behind it.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming garagraph.
Nowadays,animals are widely used in umpteen areas. However, some people believe that animals have a meat and natural energy should be give power for adolescent. For instance, they eat food chain like dogs,fish,hens ,goat, rabbit, elephant and cat so on.They are eat only categories animals and then,they is very common in abroad centuries. Furthermore, they could be not care about animals life but also they always thought about animals only use synthetic product wool clothes in the winter.
Nevertheless,they are no denying the fact that,in my opinion,animals have full right live long regard to human life.Thus, animals have a feel and emotion and as well as aminals have very faithful,honest and diligent almost all work.For instance, denizens would be understand animals problem and ever, they have be good freinds.Last but not the least, government should be law allow about aminals safe. todays, all animals ratio reducing day by day.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon.I said down, animals are meat sources is hens,fishs and goats and give wild power for all age group like todders,kids, and primitive etc.other animals such as dolphins and horses act as source entertainment.
- some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoo.others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos .Discuss both thede views and give your own opinion? 67
- Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- It is a natural process for animals species to become extinct(e.g Dinosaur,dodos.....) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this happening ).Do you agree or disagree? 84
- some cities do not restrict how styles and unique can be houses and offices that people construct.Do you think the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 44.0 13.1623246493 334% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 47.0 10.4138276553 451% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3966.0 1615.20841683 246% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 755.0 315.596192385 239% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25298013245 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.24187593597 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98232149183 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.219867549669 0.561755894193 39% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1230.3 506.74238477 243% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 27.0 5.43587174349 497% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.490188929 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.9375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.59375 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 85.0 5.01903807615 1694% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 3.4128256513 498% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405265518209 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13593855294 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107357623284 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230691814691 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989786816839 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.