You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe what went wrong with the meal and service
• suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to complain about a recent meal we had at your restaurant. Allow me to elucidate further.
I am a member of social organization “The Raven" which conducts regular meetings at your restaurant. Although quality of the meal is exceptional at your restaurant but last week the food quality was poor especially the main course which included continental food was stale and bland. additionally services offered during the meal were ordinary as compared to our past experience. To elucidate the staff was unwelcoming and took longer time in preparation of the dishes which made it the horrible dining experience.
I would also like to inform you that most of the members from our group were dissatisfied with the dining experience thus they plan to change the venue for the next meeting which will impact the business of your restaurant. Hence I would request you to supervise your staff for such important events to enhance the customer service additionally I would also like you to provide us a fifty per cent discount coupon on our next meal as a compensation.
I look forward to your immediate response on the same.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...d continental food was stale and bland. additionally services offered during the meal were o...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: additionally,
...d continental food was stale and bland. additionally services offered during the meal were o...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...e meal were ordinary as compared to our past experience. To elucidate the staff was unwelcoming...
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Line 4, column 526, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...made it the horrible dining experience. I would also like to inform you that mos...
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Line 6, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...impact the business of your restaurant. Hence I would request you to supervise your s...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... response on the same. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82558587696 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9612861512 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316003408238 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101301708505 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075931073763 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16578466419 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800897832908 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.