Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
It is thought by some that nowadays machines make many home chores that people used to make by themselves in the past. In my opinion, despite people spend much money on technical appliances that help with home chores, I consider that it gives an opportunity to spend more time for family and leisure activities.
On the one hand, there are obvious disadvantages to using machines for home duties instead doing them by themselves. Firstly, is that the price for new technical appliances is very high as these technologies are relatively new. In other words, there are not many manufacturers that produce such machines and they produce limited number of such items, as a result people have to spend big amount of money for them. Another reason to consider is that in order to settle them down people have to create additional free spaces in their living places.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits gained by people having machines that help them with home duties extremely valuable. For example, when parents do not need to spend much time on doing home duties, they have more to time to spend it with their children. Furthermore, people may have an opportunity to spend more time on different leisure activities such as sport and education. As a result their mental and physical health will be better and life expectancy can be prolonged.
In conclusion, although people have to spend money from their budgets for home appliances, I believe that having free time for family and leisure activities is more valuable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9111969112 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55842130927 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494208494208 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2906035126 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135051864203 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621649481779 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522432691768 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871769626751 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348457371288 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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