The graphs below show the age structure of a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a prediction for 2021.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the age group in a country in Europe every 40 years, from 1901 to 1981, and the estimation in 2021.
In 80 years, from 1901 to 1981, there was an enormous increase in the number of people, from 38.225.000 to 67.180.000 and this upward trend kept continuing to 2021, the population is predicted to almost doubled, compared to 1901.
In 1901 and 1941, the population structure were exactly the same, the number of people in 0-65 was dominant with, 95%. The number of people in the age group of over 85 took up only 1 % and the rest belonged to group 65-85.
However, in the next 40 years, this country witnessed a sharp rise in the percentage of the elderly. there was a fourfold increase in the over 85 age group and the percentage of the number of elderly in 65-85 was added 9%. The rate of people in the two older groups is expected to rise by 2% each in 2021
In conclusion, the age range in this European country changed not only in the population number but also in age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...65-85. However, in the next 40 years, this country witnessed a sharp rise in t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... rise in the percentage of the elderly. there was a fourfold increase in the over 85 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43243243243 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37442144769 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.876738063 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183590340074 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938487700485 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763954728303 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124819502395 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071793915486 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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