Write a letter to your manager who is leaving the company.
In your letter, you should:
• include how you are feeling about this
• what you did like about working with him/her
• ask questions about his/her future plan
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing this letter after hearing the news of your resignation from the company and would like to articulate my feelings about it.
To begin with, just like others, I am also feeling extremely unhappy about this decision. You have worked here for more than a decade and we all were like a family. This news was very shocking because next year your promotion was expected as regional manager, which is a dream for most of employees in the organization.
As had been the part of your talented team, we have completed numerous projects together successfully. I have learnt several traits that are necessary for work. In addition, your leadership skill, time management and strict rules makes you distinctive form other managers. I enjoyed while working under your supervision and will always remember you as my mentor.
If you do not mind, I would like to enquire about a few questions. First of all, how long will you be staying in the country? As you always wanted to pursue Ph.D. in Astronomical Engineering, so have you decided to study further?
I wish you all the best for your future endeavor and looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Salman Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the employees') or simply say ''most employees''.
Suggestion: most of the employees; most employees
... regional manager, which is a dream for most of employees in the organization. As had been the...
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Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reply. Yours sincerely, Salman Khan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, while, in addition, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59300288766 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5553325251 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0769230769 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354485978944 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117026572197 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552362879177 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191241231467 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030213161529 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.